Of Circles, Wheels and Cycles.

Alright, let's go beyond sleep,
two steps ahead, one step back;
Brazen vitality, unknown contours,
there's an exit!

Alright, let's go above the dream,
two steps ahead, one step back;
Black clouds, silver linings,
there's an exit!

Alright, let's go beneath the pillow,
two steps ahead, one step back;
Soliciting thoughts, paralyzing images,
there's an exit!

Alright, let's go around awake,
one step ahead, two steps back;
Blinding lights, bold shadows,
there's an exit!

Alright let's go beyond asleep,
no step ahead, one step back;
Unbroken immortality, accursed vicinity,
...

Alas.

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  1. Alright, let's get out of bed,
    two steps ahead, one step back;
    Sun streaming, coffee brewing,
    there's breakfast!

    Note: the verbs define tense (and action D'oh). Poor adjectives can only live up to the nouns you choose.

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  2. I'm reading what you're saying and all...but don't know what you're referring to here -_-

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